tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post5343081646798099181..comments2023-10-30T04:00:19.715-05:00Comments on * Perpetually Me *: Write on Wednesday- The Pact♥α§ђ£ε¥™♥http://www.blogger.com/profile/16595632956946407806noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post-28780845710677108792011-09-17T09:02:13.944-05:002011-09-17T09:02:13.944-05:00Oh yes, you were supposed to change the content. I...Oh yes, you were supposed to change the content. I understand why it may have felt wrong to do so but the exercise was about word and sentence study, looking at the way the author allows the words to flow. And then using this understanding to write your own words. I like what you came up with here and was ready to read more!<br /><br />What a story! I haven't read it but the image of them thinking back to their younger selves was haunting.<br /><br />I am glad you could use the exercise to highlight RUOK Day. Well done.InkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post-37653122058702612382011-09-15T12:28:58.483-05:002011-09-15T12:28:58.483-05:00Thanks! I wasn't sure if I was going about it ...Thanks! I wasn't sure if I was going about it right...and I'm a whole champion of a cause that isn't American yet. One day....after all, I will be a social worker, and we get things done! And Jodi is one of my faves...almost felt scandalous even considering rewriting any of her work....much less changing the whole plot of the book! So, I just hope I went about it right. It sounds like I might have (and I just noticed my use of the word gun too, sorry...)♥α§ђ£ε¥™♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/16595632956946407806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post-14349713723951050082011-09-15T07:32:54.751-05:002011-09-15T07:32:54.751-05:00I think you did a great job.I think you did a great job.K.D. Stormhttp://coffeedrivenandadventurebound.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post-18886136894467117182011-09-15T03:36:31.192-05:002011-09-15T03:36:31.192-05:00I'm really glad that a) you changed the ending...I'm really glad that a) you changed the ending in your version and b) you used it to highlight R U OK?<br /><br />I'm not in Australia either but have been following and supporting it in my own way. Hopefully one day it will become a worldwide event.<br /><br />Aside from that. I loved your choice of words (maybe just a very slight overuse of the word gun) and I think you did a really good job. <br /><br />I haven't read the book but it is now on my list to read.Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5871177378111967453.post-45587891675567508292011-09-14T06:49:18.464-05:002011-09-14T06:49:18.464-05:00Well done Ashley! Jodi Picoult is my fave too, my...Well done Ashley! Jodi Picoult is my fave too, my favourite booking is Nineteen Minutes... I would choose this for the Write on Wednesdays exercise but I don't have a copy with me because I borrowed it from a friend and have since returned it (I'm good like that!)<br /> And RUOK is a great cause. Good for you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com